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[Group 9] Telomere length is reflected by plumage coloration in barn swallow
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I do not want to seem picky, but instead of repeatedly saying telomere you could have used a pronoun to save time. On the other hand, repeating the word did force me to know what a telomere is and what it does, for example telomere is like an aglet on a shoe.
Really good video with info & a lot of understanding, The audio overlapped a little bit but still a good video!
The video was very informative, but the audio was out of place in a couple of spots. Visuals made up for any errors in audio however.
The video clearly explained the concepts from the article, but the execution could have used a little more work. There was a moment or two of audio confusion that could have been better clarified in captioning. As a whole, however, the visuals were colorful, and the video was very informative.
The video was very organized with the graphs and other visuals.
This video looks and sounds professional.
Your video is very informative and easy to follow; I like the visuals you used.
Your video is very informative and easy to follow; I like the visuals you used to relay the information.
I like that some concepts were clearly explained using effective analogies such as the telomere-shoelace analogy. Presentation format is professional but not too captivating.
Wow! Very professional presentation of the topic, yet easy enough to be understood by anyone. Great job.
Good job with defining the key terms and typing the study into what we’ve learned in class. The only improvement I’d suggest is to make the audio transitions more clear. But overall it was great!
Your video was really creative. I thought you did a good job tying in information from class, and your narrator did a good job explaining the topic in an easy way.
The information presented was well placed but there could have been more interesting aspects to attract the viewer.
Great amount of information! It was in-depth and well presented!
I thought the information was presented well. However, the audio overlapped at times, and the video was kind of dry.
I thought the information was presented well. However, the audio overlapped at times, and the video was very dull.
Visuals were good, although a bit plain at times, but great content!
The visuals and audios are so great! One of my favorites. However, I think it would have been helpful to bring in some background about the birds to hook in the audience. I liked the simile you used to explain telomeres!
I like how you explain in great detail what a telomere is and refer to what we learned in class. It made the process of understanding the concept very easy.
The video you made was clear and concise making it a good informative video. The visuals enhanced your information. The only thing you could have fixed would be the error in the voiceover, other than that you did a great job!